Tuesday, April 9, 2019

My Watermelon Writing

Me and the rest of my classroom tried watermelon and we wrote a story about it.
Watermelon
ZIIP! The annoying noise crawls into my ear like it's haunting me.
The satisfaction of the knife moving right through the giant green watermelon.
I get a peep of the pink insides of the watermelon as the classroom stands up and forms a big line.
The hard and mushy feeling gives me the shivers as I bite into the juicy fruit tasting like a watery strawberry.

By kaali

2 comments:

  1. I like that you added expantion marks but two I's in zip

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