Friday, July 26, 2019

My Poetry.

Last week Room 2 and I had to find Nouns
Adjectives, Verbs and Adverbs in a photograph
I found it hard to get verbs for the nouns but I
found writing the poem really easy.
We were learning about using Adjectives, Verbs and adverbs in our writing.


 Poem:
The Glistening Blue water slowly flows as bikers rapidly pass by.
Boats floating majestically with the wonderful view of the Sky Tower at the back of the ocean.
The beautiful green grass swayed gently in the cool breeze.
The native pohutukawa trees calmly stand underneath the cloudless sky.
Houses sharply sheltering people whilst they sleep through the calming night.
My Brainstorm:


Nouns
Adjectives
Verbs
Adverbs

Houses
Trees
Ocean
Boats
Road
Grass
Sand
Street lights
Sky
Car
Rocks
Tall
Small
Bright
Sunny
Bumpy
Colourful
Stumpy
Thin
Thick
Cloudless
Shadowed
Flat 

Standing
Biking
Driving
Flowing
Swaying
Laying 
Sheltering
Floating
Strongly
Quickly
Slowly
Gently
Softly
Quietly
Sharply
Majestically
 

1 comment:

  1. overall good writing but you put the table on the top not the bottom and you need to say more on the city in the backround

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